A camp chair,
Your words and a guitar;
That smile,
That says you don’t care.
Wild hair,
And your fingers on the strings;
A bonfire,
And the memories it brings...
Your feet,
Tapping with your song;
I’d sigh,
Though I’d know it’s wrong
To lose my wild heart
To the songs you sing,
To look at you
And, knowing what you bring,
Still sing along with you,
Still string along with you;
Once more until you leave,
Cause that’s all you have to give –
Borrowed hours with your gypsy heart.Written for the challenge - Donna the Buffalo's 'I See How You Are' @ "Imaginary Garden with Real Toads".
15 comments:
Ah. those unfaithful hearts. still knowingly we all fall for those... maybe it's those strings attached.
"Borrowed hours with your gypsy heart." Wonderful line. You could set this to music for sure.
Oh that sounds like many early experiences of love - particularly unrequited love.
Something about a wandering man that really makes a poem sing. Nice acoustics in this, the slant rhyme roll, stepping gently to its storied end.
I think you have a new song! Gypsy Heart!
Thank you all. This is really encouraging.
Truly enjoyed your offering. Gypsy heart is such great verbiage. So weary of wandering men. I can actually hear the guitar and working through the beats in your write. Line by line. Good writing here.
nice... yes, sing this! i found myself around a campfire at a festival here, music streaming from the stage over the hill as this one right in front of me serenades. :)
This brings back memories - warm, fleeting memories. Thank you :)
I love how you wove music throughout the lines of your lovely poem.
Thank you, seasideauthor and Helen. Glad you enjoyed my piece.
Thank you, Marian. Yeah, there's something about campfires, hills and music...and the fact that the heart longs for what you can't have.
Thank you, Katy. Sometimes memories are enough.
dear stranger, i posted something in autumn leaf, but wasn't sure if you're seeing those comments..
Dear Anonymous...it's really good to hear from you after all these years. I just saw the comment on "Autumn Leaf" and left you a reply there. I hope you enjoy my new posts.
Whaaaa!! Whattaaa Lovely Poem!! Why dont you put a album on this! ;)
Needs a lot of improvement, lacks your real feelings, you need to feel the breeze and the nature before it flows from mind to pen. Good effort though..
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